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The_Soviet_Duck
The_Soviet_DuckLv23yr
2021-05-27 01:16

I cant say about writing quality cuz im not native( Im russian ) I love story so far, dad being the Best Dad i read but its sad that he died, and to be honest i cry a little The Patriot of America being in Army with others America characthers make me laugh like are madman...or Principal Nezu. Mha being Mha have some good quirks and summoning weapon very good quirk i may say. and that statistic u make my brain go brrrrr(in bad way cuz im gonna forhet about it ;( ) Would he see others TF2 charaters? or overwatch and Avengers? I mean if u have some good ideas about interactions its goonna be good. And Son always remember Quality above Updates P.S. Sorry about other rev

The Soldier in MHA

MegaMacho
4.8
21 Chs

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MegaMacho
MegaMachoAuthor

Thank you! We will see more of MC friends in the future, yes. And no worry, I also prioritize quality over quantity. :)

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Hey! Author here! This is my honest review of what I expect from my own work and how it will turn out. Writing Quality - 5 stars (I know English pretty well, and I use both Microsoft word and Grammarly to fix the rest. Most mistakes are probably gonna be words with some missing letters because my keyboard sucks.) Stability of Updater - 3 stars (I want to be hopeful here, but i can never be sure, you known, gotta a life and all that.) Story Development - 5 stars (From what I imagined and refined, it looked awesome, really top tier, and the first chapter turn out pretty chill and that's good since I tried making a fanfic before and the first chapter was already impossible.) Character Design - 5 stars (My character is gonna be the most perfect replica of the soldier from team fortress 2, no matter how long it takes, and it will not be forced, since i'm gonna make explanations as to why his personality turn out to be like this. World Background - 4 stars (Not very good in doing world backgrounds, but since this is MHA i think I'm gonna have an easy time, so let's be hoperful.)

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