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AxesLv53yr
2021-05-11 13:29

The grammar needs work. I will come back and read the rest at a later time, if the grammar is fixed. Cool idea and story though!!!!!!!!!!!

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dozkiller07
dozkiller07Lv4

dude seriously. i have read much worse before. the grammar in this is in between good and fine. honestly, I didn't see any grammatical mistake as my brain automatically filtered the errors or there aren't any errors in first place

Axes
AxesLv5

Ok what does that have to do with me? He does not know how to use Commas at all. The author also forgets to use spaces a lot, or capitalize the beginning of a sentence, and it ruins the read for me. You reading much worse, or there being much worse out there has nothing to do with my critism.

dozkiller07:dude seriously. i have read much worse before. the grammar in this is in between good and fine. honestly, I didn't see any grammatical mistake as my brain automatically filtered the errors or there aren't any errors in first place
dozkiller07
dozkiller07Lv4

not replying to you though.more like saying that it's readable to other if they find ur review and thought it's not their cup of copy. and yes I have read so many mtL shît that this novel is like finding gold in mud. my poor brain has trained his resistance to insane level that it can filter the word accordingly lol.

Axes:Ok what does that have to do with me? He does not know how to use Commas at all. The author also forgets to use spaces a lot, or capitalize the beginning of a sentence, and it ruins the read for me. You reading much worse, or there being much worse out there has nothing to do with my critism.
Axes
AxesLv5

Ok but you did say dude, so you were replying to me. You cannot blame me for thinking you were talking to me.

dozkiller07:not replying to you though.more like saying that it's readable to other if they find ur review and thought it's not their cup of copy. and yes I have read so many mtL shît that this novel is like finding gold in mud. my poor brain has trained his resistance to insane level that it can filter the word accordingly lol.
dozkiller07
dozkiller07Lv4

ah.thats my fault.sorry about that

Axes:Ok but you did say dude, so you were replying to me. You cannot blame me for thinking you were talking to me.
Axes
AxesLv5

Np👌

dozkiller07:ah.thats my fault.sorry about that
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Monarch_Lord
Monarch_LordLv3

hahaha

Axes:Ok what does that have to do with me? He does not know how to use Commas at all. The author also forgets to use spaces a lot, or capitalize the beginning of a sentence, and it ruins the read for me. You reading much worse, or there being much worse out there has nothing to do with my critism.
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