if you laugh at one of these,you have to read the novel ,if you didn't laugh.....you should still read the novel,it's a pretty good novel Why don’t The Avengers use The Hulk to advertise their services? He’s essentially a giant Banner. What does Hawkeye like to wear with his suits? A bow tie. Which Avenger is the most trustworthy? The Credible Hulk. Which Avenger is always in a hurry? Black Widow; she’s Russian. What do you call it when Ironman does a cartwheel? A ferrous wheel. What is Ironman’s favorite movie? Ferrous Bueller. Why did Spider-Man join the swim team? Because he had webbed feet. Why are the Avengers so handy with tools? They’re always assembling. What happens when you cross Quicksilver with the Hulk? The Fast and the Furious. If Captain America’s shield is vibranium, what is Hawkeye’s shield? Quicksilver. (Oof

Great start with a lot if potential. MC has room to grow but doesn’t get pushed around. Have really high hopes foe this. ALSO DEATH WIFU YANDERE ALREADY MAKES IT PERFECT.

did you know that pineapple on pizza is not the worst thing that can be put on pizza. jelly beans are the worst now add those two together and you got your self garbage on a circle of cheese. Now what does this have to do with the review nothing I just needed word count and like pizza. but this book is good give it a read.

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Very long paragraphs, name of people beginning with a lowercase letter, the first word of the paragraph beginning with a lowercase letter ... honestly, there is a lot to improve

The grammar needs work. I will come back and read the rest at a later time, if the grammar is fixed. Cool idea and story though!!!!!!!!!!!

Needs a lot of work in proper spacing, capital letters, and just altogether knowledge of a lot of different words. I'm probably not all that qualified to review it considering I only read 6 chapters but it just didn't look all that promising, the only thing I really liked is that he's Asgardian and that his wife will be Death. His wish is kinda dumb considering there's a ton of different ways to get telekinesis, it might not be as good as whatever 'Bob' will give but still. He probably should of asked for higher intelligence or something better in the long run. I doubt telekinesis will help much when you get to the level of conceptual beings like Death and so on. Good luck in your future endeavors and I hope this will be a learning experience.

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Amazing just amazing uour one of my favrits author keep up the good work becus your the bear arond nothings eve hoing to get you down your the nest around