21 chapters read, overall good story, translation quality (3) is good as in grammar, but five great families of us not a thing (can be waved off as part of the fiction world), repeats already proven statements (might be an emphasize, but it gives more of a repetition effect then emphasize), and some other stuff. Good plot, nice system though ‘divine’ skills, not all deserve the title divine, but still good. Good story development (5). Background (4) build-up is good-ish. Updating stability(5)-probably will stay at 40 for long time thou Characters (4)-Nice backgrounds for some Enjoyed reading :) (+1 in translation quality)
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