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The 'system' in the work is sort of unique since it has a few stats up to many chapters, the MC doesn't die [although it's still vague] It seems that probably he is teleported to another world with just one huge power 'He has the control of whole world.' The question remains, how? Well, we yet have to proceed through more than first 6 chapters to see that. He hears a female voice as he is tossed in some cosmos or some void before he landed to the particular world. Through first 4 chapters we have been shown a few stats and glimpse of the task, along with the eagerness of the system which leaves clues for MC rather than the traditional stats tablet in most novels. Talking about the quality despite being French the author has done a great job in keeping up with the pace and English, although you can see a few French words sprinkled. If you are aiming to see the magic and systematical powers via technology, then this is a good read for you to pick up due to the unique system. GOOD POINTS: - Unique system and clever MC. - Good paced and fast. - Narration style is showing rather than omnipresent author. - Lesser info dumps. WEAKNESS: - The flow of the chapter 3 and 4 is a little abrupt which feels complicated, that I'd to re-read the chapters to grasp. - A few places has tense fluctuations.

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The day I became the World Administrator

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Thank you very much for your feedback. The first chapters (including 3 and 4) will be checked to the proofreaders and updated as soon as possible. I appreciate you reading this story !