REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) 😉 ADVICE I wanted to tell that few edits has to made. The typos not the grammar. You have fluid narration for me but the typos were the dilemma of its quality. Few edits has to be made for my advice. Capital letters, punctuations. Dialogues not starting with a capital letter and not ending with a comma or period. Welp, this is a wonderful story so I want it to be edited as I like it as a reader. It was normal to see these problems just when I started. But I overcome it, so you can do it too! 🙏 😉 Peace ✌️

I was recommended this story and in spite of a few chapters available, you will discover it's a lovely tale and the author has a strong narrator voice. It's easy to overlook some typos and immerse yourself in the introduction of a promising story. It starts with a princess having her destiny turned upside down by an arranged marriage! I'm curious to discover what is the prince's curse! It gets more interesting as the chapters go! Good luck author!

I loved the plot twist of this novel. It has unexpected storyline and characters. Definitely has huge potential for more exciting story along the way. I am waiting for the updates everyday.

This book has an interesting plotline. Though there are only few chapters when I'm reading this, I can already see a potentially big romance novel. There are still some spelling mistakes but with a general proof reading can rectify them. Overall, it's an excellent book with very immersive story.

This is my honest review, First Author your novel is a chefs kiss, it really interesting and has a unique plot, the story goes with flow and the description are wonderful. ( Don't mind me I just love the author whose description are clear) And tbou there were some grammatical and punctuation mistakes here and there. still no worries ( I do that too 😅) It will be better with time. And keep writing, your novel is just great!!

The story is very engaging and entertaining. I literally read through from chapter 1 to 270 in 3 days. If you can overlook the grammatical errors, this book is well worth the time.

I mean what does this book not have? Intriguing characters, evil step-mother of the west. I know she liked the king before he died. No one can tell me she didn't. ANyways lovely writing. Can't wait for more.

I am on chapter 333. I am enjoying the story and you will too if you can overlook the grammatical errors. Then again, they're not grammatical errors, the entirely wrong word is used. It's like the words were chosen based off of phonetics not meaning. You will have a gist of what the author is saying so you're able to follow along and keep reading. Despite that, I highly recommend reading this novel. You will not be disappointed .

I really loved this story. The characters and the storyline were excellent and well developed. I enjoyed the relationship between the main characters the most. The only thing that I would recommend is to have someone proofread the chapters. The grammar and spelling were often times frustrating and would take away from enjoying the story fully.

You had me after I read the first chapter! I am NOT a fan of the step-monster. Her father is a wimp. And Princess Ellen is a hero! I'm looking forward to more chapters