Review Detail of Paradox_ in Douluo Dalu: Ice Emperor

I mean story wise it’s pretty good. But quite a few problems. - grammar - Weird dialogue (uses -Hi- instead of “Hi”) - TOO MUCH EXPLAINING with very little dialogue to counteract it - Paragraph upon paragraph of summaries with a couple sentences of talking makes it boring Easy to lose interest due to said problems as I found it hard to keep going with stale flow of events