Item: legend of white eye douluo
Rating: 2
Author: Darius_Chromwell

Darius_ChromwellLv53yr

2021-05-07 00:37

I love the concept of this novel but the chapters are really just too short, if you where to put all forty “chapters “ together then you might get two normal length chapters.

legend of white eye douluo

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