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Suoshi
SuoshiLv23yr
2021-05-17 15:59

Great story. The synopsis is very detailed and attractive. System stories are a personal fav of mine, so I like it. Overall, I really like your work, keep it up! :)

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SuoshiLv2

Though the pacing is too fast, I advise you to work on that! :)

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Sure working on that recently and thanks for the review 😃

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