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Light_BreezeAuthor3yr
2021-06-12 22:16

Time to review my own book, I had the idea to write a novel which will have sci-fi, royal romance and fantasy tangled up. And yeah I didn't find such book so chose to write one. As they say read and read and when you don't find the one you want to read write it. I am giving the story a 5/5 since it's way better than the other stories I tried from another acc on wn (The Prince's Adorable Princess) and mangatoon. Try the first 2 chapters, if you are into FL novels I assure you that it won't be disappointing. I am working on improving the quality of the chapters, grammars and emotions.

His Royal Consort From Another World

Light_Breeze
4.8
116 Chs

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SomeoneBad
SomeoneBadLv2

This story starts out with intertwining perspectives from both sides, jumping from one side to another, though the switch is natural and easy to keep track of. The writing excels when specific character interactions played out, with the subtlety of emotions being the key highlights. The descriptive phrases also helped immerse me into the environment. The dialogue seemed like a mix of modern language and British-style posh dialogue courtesy of the royalties backdrop, and it's rather amusing to read for those that enjoys it. There are some occasional grammar mistakes here and there, though it doesn't detract from the flow of the story at all.

3yr

for_villainess0
for_villainess0Lv4

I'm giving you 5 stars. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 If you're looking for romance with hints of royalty and sci-fi , this is for you. I haven't gone far into the chapters , but I can tell you that it's a beautiful read. Check this story out. Give it a chance. You won't regret it. Love ! Love ! Love! (｡・//ε//・｡) ♡˖꒰ᵕ༚ᵕ⑅꒱

3yr
Akira_Monadelle
Akira_MonadelleLv13

I was a bit confused at the beginning but the more I read the more I became able to understand the flow of conversation and match each name to a character. I know the novel has ways to go but I love Ziren's character so much, cold Prince but soft to only the one he likes... just my type lol. Definitely looking forward to more updates :)

3yr
Rude_Ana
Rude_AnaLv2

I've read the first chapters and I'm already intrigued! The switch between the characters and their dialogues are easy to follow and the way they are written is well-thought and actually lets you get in their mind. I love how the descriptions of the surroundings lets you imagine it in real life. Overall, I enjoyed reading the first chapters and I will surely continue. If you like slowburn romantic fantasy books then this should be in your list! (I also appreciate the good grammar😁)

3yr
Suoshi
SuoshiLv2

Great story. The synopsis is very detailed and attractive. System stories are a personal fav of mine, so I like it. Overall, I really like your work, keep it up! :)

3yr
Rayene_Blue
Rayene_BlueLv1

It's a great idea. I like the sypnosis and the chaps but the only thing that is keeping me away from reading the book is the placing. I hope that the author rewrites it till then it shall be in my lib

3yr
The_Procrastinator
The_ProcrastinatorLv4

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Coco_2410
Coco_2410Lv1

This was an interesting read! I liked the different povs which were incorporated throughout the first few chapters. Themes, of royalty and fantasy seemed to be at the forefront. The authors descriptions built the world creating a whimsical scene. I enjoyed the interactions between the characters, which was supported by the easy to read dialogue and actions tags. Just a side note, I think the author could add greater detail for character descriptions. Though, this does not mean it was not great. Great work! [img=recommend]

3yr
Wicked_Snail
Wicked_SnailLv2

Too many characters right from the start. Had a hard time keeping up, but I won't dawdle on this too much. The idea is interesting and has the potential for advancement. The world is intriguing and new.

3yr
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