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hansora
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2021-05-13 16:30

We only have 10 chapters so far but, the story is engaging enough. I appreciate that your writing seems the 'direct and in action' type, it helps to make me stay focus on the book I hope the updates would be stable in the future, keep it up!

The Man Who Loved Snakes

TaintedMetal
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20 Chs

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TaintedMetal
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Thank you! Because I have another novel ongoing, I am doing what I can to both stockpile and carefully craft the chapters for this novel. Thank you also for your stars and for your praise on my writing.

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