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kamal_victorian
kamal_victorianLv36mth
2024-09-22 12:51

It's just not my cup of tea. I hate this fic very much. Because it only had fight seens, nothing else. MC gets a little stronger, add 5 chapter of NPC filler fight. He gets a little bit of interaction with others, add 5 chapter of NPC Filler fight. I get it, they are on war. But the people MC fights atleast has to be a bit popular or something. Not random Jonin spawning out of knowhere. Honestly it should more War, deafeating every Chunin and Jonin of other countries, I see. Rather something about MC making Uchiha clan stronger.

I became the Patriarch of the Uchiha clan.

Rak_Mais1
3.7
790 Chs

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kamal_victorian
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I forgot to mention, This review had nothing to do with bad grammar quilty. I didn't counted that in. It's purely based on the story and plot of this novel. No story, No intresting stuff

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