Grammar is Terrible but still a little readable. Interesting story but as I said, the grammar ruins it. There are even times when the character names become chinese, comeon this is a japanese show, not a chinese wuxia xianxia bull.

Got to chapter 15 said there was no chapter released came Back on 10-20 Minutes later now has 70 chapters...... love you author for great work

the grammar is really bad, I can't understand anything. . .... . . . .

the story is good but the translation is a fxcking abomination and it's turn off all the excitement when I saw this fanfic basically it's just like when you buy something only from it outside appearance but the inside is not what it show from the cover outside.

Beautiful fanfiction. Can we have the link in the original history in Chinese? [img = consiglia] ............................................................

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the grammar and sentences are terrible some sentence makes absolutely no sense, the grammar is as messed up as porridge. almost unreadable. I'm 80% sure, this is machine translated

I see how some people argue that the novel has bad writing but it is to be expected for a novel that has be mtl (Machine Translation). You could find perthora of these type of writing in the mtl novel website. Some of the vote novel, you can find on there already. I have seen a novel that has 4000+ chapters. The fanfics that have anime plot; there a big chance the MC is going to have a chinese name.

It’s MTL what do you expect. Though it looks like a really good/fun story, would’ve been better if it was actually done through a real translator instead of this copy pasta