Review Detail of _Ram_ in Demonic Host Against The Bloodline

This is my first time reading a vampire theme novel and as of writing this review, I'm only 10 chapters in. Firstly, in terms of story pacing, it is just about right I guess. Not too 'draggy' or short either. As for grammar usage, I personally don't find it confusing and could understand the story in general. Couldn't comment much on that topic as I am not an expert in it myself. However, I find the lack of description makes it a little disorienting at times. Secondly, although the action is present in every chapter, the necessary elements of world-building can't seem to catch up and I was thus left with dialogues after dialogues without being able to imagine the proper scenes that are taking place. Nevertheless, I can say that consistency in story telling is there and by inserting the atmosphere and environment properly into those scenes, it would make it more easier for readers to imagine and immerse themselves in the story. Good luck fellow author!