_Ram_
Author of Webnovel's two original novels (UIU & BARS)
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Hello! Webnovel has always been the main platform for me to publish back in the day. Royalroad among with other platforms were used to get more exposure, but since management of different platforms became a hassle, I only focused on webnovel and my patreon ever since! :)
As per the adult tag only, I can definitely say that there are some steamy scenes in this novel. The progression is not that bad and not too draggy, from the moment she woke up to the point where she develop a secret relationship, there are many interesting scenes in between them. While this genre might be foreign to me, I can at least follow the story without being too disoriented. Good luck in your future endeavor author!
This is my first time reading a vampire theme novel and as of writing this review, I'm only 10 chapters in. Firstly, in terms of story pacing, it is just about right I guess. Not too 'draggy' or short either. As for grammar usage, I personally don't find it confusing and could understand the story in general. Couldn't comment much on that topic as I am not an expert in it myself. However, I find the lack of description makes it a little disorienting at times. Secondly, although the action is present in every chapter, the necessary elements of world-building can't seem to catch up and I was thus left with dialogues after dialogues without being able to imagine the proper scenes that are taking place. Nevertheless, I can say that consistency in story telling is there and by inserting the atmosphere and environment properly into those scenes, it would make it more easier for readers to imagine and immerse themselves in the story. Good luck fellow author!
Cadis Etrama D. Raizel, is that you?
---Short message from author--- Hello everyone! Yes, I am back to writing chapters again! Apologies for my WN readers and my Patr0ns for being MIA for quite a while, but being a teacher, I had to prepare quite a hefty stuff for my students, being that its their end of the year exams. You know how that goes... endless marking and correction sessions.. the nightmare... but its all over now! I took a few days of break enjoying and loving myself (playing games, watching movies, anime, reading manga/manhwas and catching up all the novels I missed) ((SO HERE IT IS BOIS AND GALS!)) For this week, it will be daily release! Hooray! Thanks for the support! --- End of Message --- BTW.. FIRST! HAHA