Review Detail of Mel_Aniv in The Hidden Sage and The Star Chariot

REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE Wow this is an exhilarating read! The opening was like a movie on my view. Definitely recommend this to others and I am so happy to say that your has the potential in which I don't have. More power to you and may it find success. New readers, please give this novel a chance, it will surely not disappoint you.