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triple_0verkillZ
triple_0verkillZLv133yr
2021-12-13 13:16

Yet another case of an interesting idea ruined by poor writing. Honestly this is one of the worst quality cultivation novels I've ever read, and that's saying something.

Epic Of The Second Strongest Demonic Blade King

koladeizdavid
3.9
204 Chs

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BlueDragon13
BlueDragon13Lv4

I think the story is pretty good and sort of interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.

3yr

CloudSmoke
CloudSmokeLv5

To: Author The concept was good and interesting but the execution was disappointing The main things that got me to drop this were that You over explain things, You under explain things, The story was rushed and The emotions didn’t feel realistic Partly because it was rushed but also because it didn’t feel like you had a good enough grasp of the emotions you’re trying to bring to the table I guess you could say And of course the Slight but annoying grammar errors I’m not trying to say that you don’t have talent or that you should give up I’m just saying that this could be better and that it was disappointing

3yr
MAIDENLESS
MAIDENLESSLv1

if its only the second strongest then its trash .

3yr
Booggie
BooggieLv4

Good book so far but the names of the spirit beast Are so long for no reason.

3yr
DaoistEQItp8
DaoistEQItp8Lv1

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3yr
Vinicius_Mattos
Vinicius_MattosLv12

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Deine_Mudfa
Deine_MudfaLv1

I think there is something wron with the 5 Stars Reviews.... TrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrash

3yr
LordAinzSama
LordAinzSamaLv5

Aye yo, I don't know about second blade king xhing cheng or zhong ding dung, but that boi over there looks like Kayn ngl.... ..........................

3yr
Master_Of_gu
Master_Of_guLv1

You did a good job making mc a villain. The events were fun but the problem is with a lot of information and superpowers that you quickly give him, this leads to confusion for the viewer as it is difficult to keep track of these many abilities, mc is acting a bit reckless towards people stronger than him, on the whole the most thing sexy is mc character good luck

2yr
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