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really like how the world is expanding so far

I wanted to add an update to my review here. I've gotten to roughly chapter 120 now, and I can say quite a lot of things have changed. First of all I think the Lovecraftian thing I said is a little misguided, I wrote that right after dealings with a cultish "sect", but I can say now its 100% eastern fantasy. It has been more on the wuxia side of things so far, being all about body refinement with realistic levels of power, but as the MC gets stronger it seems it will inevitably be more of a xianxia novel. As the MC has been more fleshed out, I also no longer think hes necessarily bland. He is moreso just cautious and measured, but as he's getting more powerful, we're starting to see him be a bit more bold with showing his power, and I think that will continue. I also think both the story and the power system is opening up quite a bit, and it honestly looks quite exciting so far. The author has started introducing higher powers, and the power system opened up quite nicely in my opinion. I think this novel will be very good as it gets more chapters.

I've gotten to roughly chapter 50 so far and I can say its fairly good. Its nothing special, but its a fairly engaging novel with a likable MC. The MC is quite smart and cautious, and isn't really written as evil or good, for the most part being neutral. My only complaint is that the MC feels a little bland sometimes due to his nature, but I'd rather have that than the usual hero MC getting himself into trouble, making unnecessary enemies, etc. The world almost seems to be a bit of a blend between your standard wuxia novel and a little bit of an almost Lovecraftian sort of feel. The pacing feels solid, and the progression so far is good, however it can be a bit basic at times. For example, MC will train, then instant time skip 6 months, he's at a new level of strength. etc. I do wonder how the author will handle his power progression later, because at chapter 50 he is already quite strong, and with his "cheat", he essentially doesn't have many limits besides his environment. The world building isn't bad, and I appreciate how the author sprinkles it in here and there as opposed to walls of text you'd sometimes see in books, but it does feel a bit lackluster at times. Overall, I'd say that the novel atleast until where I've read is quite decent, and is worth a read. I think if the author handles it well, and develops the story and their writing further, this could be a very popular novel.

I don't think it's being mixed up, the word servant is commonly used for government officials. For example, a police officer would be a civil servant.

from messages in the discord server from his friend, it can be implied that it was most likely suicide, it's really sad..

Hi Author, I'm not sure if you will read this, but I wanted to let you know your novel is being plagiarized and stolen on Amazon as an ebook. Its called "VALOR: A Cultivation Fantasy Adventure for Men" by Atticus Ronald, and is completely copy and pasted. I actually found this from another novel I've read named Ascension of the Immortal Asura, which was also copied by the same person, as well as a few other webnovels.

author is clearly deleting bad reviews from his novel

of course they are lol, half the author's do this on this app. they have their novel sitting at 4.8 stars or some really high rating and you read it and it's a dumpster fire xD

Honestly I thought the same but he starts showing his uses here and there and eventually towards like chap 650-700 an event happens that causes him to kinda have a personality shift for the better

Really great cultivation novel, one of the few truly entertaining ones on this app and in my opinion underrated. I also really appreciate how the author writes their story arcs, especially in the jade dragon empire inheritance and the blood fiend sect story arcs. Keep up the good work author 😎👍