Review Detail of JUST_LAUGH in Devouring the Heavens (ATG)

It's only 7 chapters but it's long so this review is based on all 7 chapters. Writing Quality: It's well done since the author is an English speaker. The writing is much detailed(for me) and I can imagine what the author describing. Overall it's 5 stars. Story Development: So far it's good for now. And info it's has a system but not your system where a yandere or annoying, its simple system(cheat one though) that helps him to get strong faster than normal. Character Design: the MC has cancer and in his childhood, he is in hospital and came in contact with strange phenomena that he meets a girl that he thought a part of his dream. And that said girl he has romantic development, I don't know about the others but for me, it's a good development. Updating Stability: None since it's only a fresh book. World Background: Well it's ATG if you want to know just read the novel. First Time writing Review like this so IDK if my saying is fit into the category.