I actually can't say much about the story, the initial idea itself is very good, but it depends on how the author executes it, I hope and believe the story will progress in a good way. The thing that I am concerned with is that, the writing quality is below average (Sorry author for being harsh) even the most basic of grammar, is faulty, when you started reading, the wrong grammar will disturb the flow, and you won't have good time. So in my opinion, read this if you don't give a **** about grammar and only want to focus on the story. Good luck with the story Author!
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