Review Detail of kuhaku_sora in Make me a villain

The story feels nice and refreshing. I have not read anything like this for a long time here in webnovel. The concept of the story is superb, since there are authors out ther wanting to kill their mainleads or some sort (with a little twist in this novel.) I only read few of the chapters here, but I cannot wait to read more about your story! The only thing that I'd like to point out is the tenses, dialogues, "showing" and "Telling", and perspectives. Although changing perspective is great and all, but you need to make an entire chapter about it ( I think) or even more. In this way, the readers would feel intact with the character. Shifting between perspectives my stray the readers, so be wary about that! kudos for the author~ (the gif is the girl laughing when she kills the characters in her stories)