I loved the tone of the story, the magical world seemed promising the story was well-paced, the dialogues were well scripted the story had a flow in it easily understandable. And couldn't find any particular mistakes that may affect the story, at first I thought the MC would be like a shy innocent kind of girl but turns out no she isn't, tbh this may look like a fake praise but no, this is my honest review author you're doing awesome
Kiiara
Liked by 2 people
LIKE