The plotline is good and the characters are very… unusual. The author needs to watch out for minor spelling errors, preposition issues and slightly improper tense usage, however [basically grammatical errors in general]. If you haven’t already, I would suggest getting someone else to proofread your work, so that you can be sure your work is with as few mistakes as possible [or you can take the time to read your story from the first chapter to the latest each time you post a new chapter, so that you can be sure your story flows smoothly WITH as few mistakes as possible in between]. Keep up the good work, author! P.S I love the plot twist in Chapter 2; thought it was gonna be a normal transmigration story~
Alancaster
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LIKEHow do I put this? I find them very enchanting and interesting to analyze. Maybe it's just me but I feel like there are quite a few facets to their personalities.
Alancaster:Btw, can you elaborate on the characters being 'unusual'?
A11urea:How do I put this? I find them very enchanting and interesting to analyze. Maybe it's just me but I feel like there are quite a few facets to their personalities.