So far, it's a good story but it still needs to be polished. One downside is that the author is still inexperienced so the writing is still not very good. About the story, I found it a little strange a low level technique to put the MC in a vulnerable state where she becomes killable, I think this is a bit forced for a technique still weak and in development even more with this being a wood style technique, which should strengthen vitality instead of taking away MC's immortality. Other than those points I think it's an interesting fanfic to read. It's certainly not a work of art, but it's a good read and clearly the author put effort into his work. I hope the quality will improve in the future, along with the author's skill.
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