It is interesting for sure. It's hard for me to tell if my critiques are because of the story itself or simply because this is not a genre I usually read. I wonder why she is so insistent on getting revenge for the people who hurt the original body's owner. In my eyes there is nothing wrong or trashy about being weak, but it seems like she was also mean and tyrannical herself, making me wonder if she brought some of the hatred on herself. She also seems to just be really good at everything. I wonder what challenges she will have to face in the future and how she will grow as a character. Still, I think the world is interesting and I actually enjoyed the smaller chapters, which are a big contrast to my own long chapters. That made it easy to read through a lot of the story without getting trapped in one scene for too long.
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