Review Detail of Blue_Pizza in Rebirth of the golden lineage

Get me some new tear ducts. My old ones broke down. Although the writing quality is great, the thing that stood out most is the emotion. Miguel is relatable and funny at times, and has his own flashbacks and backstories, but what I'm talking about is the PAIN. I felt it slam into me like a truck and I wanted to cry. The start is a bit slow, but that's ok. It's all important to the plot. I love the meaning behind Gaby's name and the obvious thought and/research author put into creating this book and giving each character life. Although I'm just at the part mc gets his new life, I can already tell this story is progressing beautifully. It all flows really well. Never lose that touch to connect readers with the characters, author. Good luck!