Hello! My ID is zaikophl

I'm new to this platform and most novels seemed very similar, but I'm thrilled to have found this masterpiece. The MC, Azrael, has a mysterious background, and the author's choice of True Archangel and Devil Sin names adds depth. The plot and characters are excellent, and the writing style draws you in. I hope the author continues this beautiful story that's not the typical reincarnation trope. While it's still early, it shows great potential. The poetic English is a standout. It's a treasure that doesn't rely on reincarnation or demon lords. The fight scenes could use more intensity, but character development and the writing style are fantastic. Keep it up!

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É importante trabalhar na melhoria da escrita, mas o enredo é interessante. O autor tem potencial, embora a escrita precise de ajustes. Há elogios ao conceito da história, que envolve mulheres empoderadas e resistência à colonização. A escrita é vista como um ponto de desenvolvimento, e sugere-se uma adaptação ao formato de WebNovel. No geral, o feedback é construtivo e incentiva o autor a continuar buscando melhorias.

I was pleasantly surprised to find that the book is quite smooth and exceptionally well-written. Your ability to create a captivating narrative made me feel comfortable while reading, even though it's not my favorite genre. Your talent as an author is evident. Keep persevering and producing more remarkable works!

Thanks so much! I'm glad to read your comment

It's not my job, exactly. But I think it's good that you had that thought. Haha. Thanks so much!

Eu elogio a criatividade da trama e a qualidade da escrita, bem como os relacionamentos dinâmicos entre os personagens principais. Fiquei viciado na história e estou ansioso para ver como ela se desenvolverá no futuro.

"Although it's not my favorite genre of romance, I have to admit that this contemporary story deserves all the stars it's receiving. Even someone like me, who doesn't usually get interested in this genre, finds the plot truly engaging. The author managed to captivate me with the first chapters and the intriguing synopsis. I'm looking forward to more chapters and holding my breath to find out what will happen next."

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There are too few chapters to write a review, but the synopsis is interesting, it looks a lot like an introduction, not a synopsis, but it draws a lot of attention for those who like the genre. Keep Going!

Just an interesting chapter, so not much else to say. The title caught my attention a lot. Select a synopsis and keep going! [img=atualização]

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I read the first few chapters, and I found the story interesting, especially the intense action in the first chapter and the potential to capture readers' attention in the subsequent chapters. The author managed to create a poignant and engaging passage with emotional depth that gripped me. However, I felt that the visual description of the environment could be more detailed, and I look forward to further world and character development. Overall, the reading is intriguing, and I commend the author's writing and dedication to regular updates.

I'm still reeling from the emotional rollercoaster this story put me through. It left me wanting more, especially in season 2, where I hope to see the villains face justice. The world-building is solid, but I'd love more visual descriptions of the environment and the characters' appearances. Despite that, the story's development is awesome, and the world-building is stellar, making it an engaging read. I've only read a few chapters, but I highly recommend this story. It's not too predictable and strikes a balance that appeals to a broad audience. The interactions between characters are unexpectedly gripping, adding depth to the experience. I can't wait to see how the MC tackles the challenges ahead. The author's dedication to describing the story's world is admirable, and the pacing is just right. It's definitely worth a read, and I'm excited to continue.

I praised the story for its mystery, involving multiple perspectives and rich descriptions. The world-building is vivid, and the writing quality is excellent, with few grammatical errors. However, I found some words challenging, but overall, I'm enjoying the experience and looking forward to uncovering the mysteries. The story's pace is well-balanced, and the diverse characters add depth. I notice the author's ability to create an atmosphere of intrigue, promising an immersive journey into a captivating world. I'm curious about the main character's hidden identity and commend the author's research on different cultures to create the fictional world.

Thank you very much for the comment, I will try to deromanticize more from now on. I agree with you.

thanks so much!

Thanks so much!

thanks so much!