The novel is a pretty good slice of life. Has pretty good harem members as well. Very interested to see where this novel develops in his goal to become rich, influential, and most of all powerful. Hope he becomes more manly though as he grows and starts acting more like the man of the house. Sometimes, especially with the mom, he kinda feels submissive. Also author-kun this novels plot is kinda similar to another ecchi novel called [So Pure So Flirtatious]. It also has to do with the mc gaining powers and overtime growing his power both in business wise as well as in the underworld to better protect and maintain his ever growing harem. Also becoming a good fighter like your mc. Maybe you can't check it out and get any inspiration or ideas to improve your novel.
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Umm.. I've already read it upto about 250 chapters but it was tooooooo slow. One sexual girlfriend and one normal girlfriend at 300 and introduction part goes for 500+ chapters. It was fun but at times boring, I didn't read it full but I think mine will be a lot shorter and fast growing than that and with much different story. I'll definitely consider your request. THANKS FOR THE REVIEW●●●●
He'll become manlier and a sigma Male as the story moves forward. Also, just remember that MC respects his mother a lot, she struggled for him alone for 9 years and gave all her love and respect to him even after she had all the time, beauty and money to start again with someone adult and... mature. He has deep respect and appreciation for her and thus most of the time his mother will be his most preferred one. That's all, he just acts submissive in the starting chapters as he was just a child.
Yeah, it is kind of a long read. Could definitely understand some getting bored with the pace.
drunken_undrunk:Umm.. I've already read it upto about 250 chapters but it was tooooooo slow. One sexual girlfriend and one normal girlfriend at 300 and introduction part goes for 500+ chapters. It was fun but at times boring, I didn't read it full but I think mine will be a lot shorter and fast growing than that and with much different story. I'll definitely consider your request. THANKS FOR THE REVIEW●●●●
