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Ash_RoSe
Ash_RoSeLv13yr
2022-04-24 17:23

I'm disappointed. The event in the 17th episode was a complete disappointment for me. (spoilers)!! It was disgusting when Mc's woman ran away crying while being force kissed. Maybe she thought he was kissing her on purpose, but running away crying was the last thing I expected. natasha promised him but still kissed someone. After following him for 4 years, it was obvious that this was going to happen. author's explanation about this, of course, a 21-year-old widow will want something. Man, you even admitted that the kiss was forced at first and then intentional. And mc left natasha without speaking for only 1 week. When they talked a week later, he said that he would never see that man again and that's how much mc forgave him. From now on there will be a cultivation arc where mc will be a wimp even when he should have beaten someone. When author-san is developing an MC's character, readers have a certain limit to MC's stupidity. And it was a huge disappointment. I'm leaving it to avoid a tantrum at any stupidity he does from now on and make a much more angry criticism. I normally give 3-3.5 points, but I will give 4.5 in order not to drop it too much. Anyone who likes the story can still read it.

Fulfilling Life of an Urban Time Manipulator

drunken_undrunk
4.3
136 Chs

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drunken_undrunk
drunken_undrunkAuthor

umm.... I could only say that you dropped it at the wrong chapter. I am sure you would not be able to criticize it after reading it atleast upto 40. But anyways, these are your thoughts and I respect it. Thanks for the review.

3yr
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Umut_9573
Umut_9573Lv12

i swear every author says stuff like “read till this chapter that chapter” but the thing is, we simply cannot do so as the beginning/middle stage is where we read to make sure we would LIKE to continue reading on. we all have out own certain limitations and patience

drunken_undrunk:umm.... I could only say that you dropped it at the wrong chapter. I am sure you would not be able to criticize it after reading it atleast upto 40. But anyways, these are your thoughts and I respect it. Thanks for the review.
2yr
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Melshan
MelshanLv7

thanks for letting me know and I'm already dropping.

2yr
11
Matthew_Wring
Matthew_WringLv4

thanks for the heads-up!

1yr
2
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ProTect_LoLi
ProTect_LoLiLv4

i would describe this novel as simple and sexy . story is not so complicated, it is simple and girls get there own screen time. Also i would like to read mc using his power more. All in all this type of book is one of my favorite when you can relax and read it .

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drunken_undrunk
drunken_undrunkAuthor

ANSWERS OF SOME IMP. QUESTIONS ---- But before that I want to tell you I gave 3 stars in writing quality, 3 stars in story development, 3 for character design, 5 for updating stability(because I'm doing my best of the best for it), 2 stars for world background. It sounds hypocritic but I did rate how I feel about my writing. ANSWERS -- 1. Nobody other than MC could turn on/off his powers even if they pull his ears with full force but if he touches the person or an object then it/that/he/she will also feel the change in flow of time. [ ONLY BY TOUCH ] 2. He will age in normal time rate and there will be no difference from others even if he uses his power for infinite time. 3. There's no time limit to his powers but living all the time with different flow of time feels..... unpleasant so he does not use his power in daily life much. ( As per me ) 4. It will be a normal world so don't expect superpowers/cultivation/fantasy setting. He will have adventures but not any supernatural ones. 5. There's no sad/complicated/unimaginable background story. This is a pure slice of life novel with some little adventures in the future. IF YOU HAVE OTHER QUESTIONS THEN ASK THEM HERE•••••• I READ ALL THE COMMENTS~~

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Queen_Karina
Queen_KarinaLv14

⚠️ Slight ntr warning chapter 17⚠️, besides that everything was good. Scroll to have a summary for the ntr bit Mc and his mom have a promise about her waiting 8-10 years to be with Mc since he was 6 years old at the time… during this chapter the mc comes home and finds his mom making out with some guy, mc cry’s and goes to room, mom and guy argue the she slaps him and he leaves. Mom begs for forgiveness while crying since mc is all she has. Mc ignores her for a week then the have a heart to heart and reconcile. Apparently the guy has been Pershing her for 4 years and came to her house and forcefully kissed her, and since the mom is s**ually frustrated she got turned on by the kiss and that’s when the mc walked in. (This is the only ntr part in the story)

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Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

Trash. Honestly trash. The thing I hate most is when a novel is good, and then some garbage event comes up that’s so bad that I drop it instantly. Super disappointing that the MC turned out to be a wimp who lets his women kiss other men.

2yr
abcdefghi987654321
abcdefghi987654321Lv3

the unnecessary drama ruin it for me and how unsatisfying the mc deals with it the more i read the more i realise how wimp and how much of a simp the mc really is

2yr
Sagely_pervert
Sagely_pervertLv4

a good slice of life story with harem. i like that power given to mc is not too overpowered . English is also good and their is no netorare so i want people to give it a try.

3yr
trickster_
trickster_Lv4

author love this novel so please don't stop this. it is well written also grammar is good. mc also know when to take advantage and also author i hope there is no ntr in this novel.

3yr
Queen_Karina
Queen_KarinaLv14

Reveal spoiler

2yr
NyxOuroboros
NyxOuroborosLv11

Just wonderful, even though chapter 17 sucks, the development that follows is just perfect, although it's a bit tedious because some of the women have already done dirty with it, they're still worried about various unnecessary things even though the protagonist assured them.

2yr
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