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TheKonnan17
TheKonnan17Lv43yr
2021-08-15 03:30

Pretty good. The grammar needs to be better and it does take you out of the immersion of the story. The story is still good though and I do recommend it to others to read.

Sub zero in MCU

patinhoDEUSVULT
4.0
41 Chs

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nicehat
nicehatLv3

it not the worst thing I have read on Webnovel but to be honest it was just too ruched and the mc does do a lot of stupid stuff for no reason I'm not hating on author the idea is pretty good if only it was done right

3yr

ElG0hary
ElG0haryLv5

Not Recommended at all The Only thing in MC mind is killing Not Recommended at all The Only thing in MC mind is killing Not Recommended at all The Only thing in MC mind is killing Not Recommended at all The Only thing in MC mind is killing

3yr
Reaper_X_7998
Reaper_X_7998Lv15

overall a great read if you can get past the atrocious grammar and sentances that make zero sense other than thats its good😐👍.............

3yr
OukisLips
OukisLipsLv15

The grammar is so awful. If it was intelligible then I wouldn't rate it poorly solely for the grammar and spelling, but it was so awful I had to re-read each sentence twice to understand what the author was trying to write, and then a third time to understand what the author was trying to convey. And sometimes even with context some sentences are just completely unintelligible even after re-reading them several times. Maybe if the concept or characterization was unique or interesting then I could overlook the grammar, but both concept and characterization are quite average for a fanfic on this app.

3yr
Martial_Pursuit
Martial_PursuitLv4

if you except sub-zero to be the one in this MCU works then forget it, it's reincarnated fellow with the power. if the story is using actual Sub zero dealing with the problem during WW2 the author could have a good story premise. and the author does google or Reddit how to write dialogue.

3yr
MightBeGay
MightBeGayLv15

First of all the concept is great in my eyes and the fact that hes born during world war 2 is refreshing. The problem i have is that the english is bad and hard to read, it doesnt flow like it should rather its almost stuttery, reason for that being incorrectly chosen words and wacky sentence structure

3yr
Sutadasuto
SutadasutoLv10

OK so it’s a good book if you can get past all of the well bullshit when you read this you feel like the person that Made this is a piece of shit because the MC is not only selfish but just plain old evil he does all of this for power but not to gain anything that has any real worth the grammar is for some people bad but I cannot understand it perfectly and my main language is English again if you like a villain emcees you should read this but just a fare Warning this MC it’s actually a piece of trash You can tell inside his previous world he stayed inside the house too much and all he did was watch anime and read comics because there’s no Way that he had human contact and friends and acting like this in another world I feel like if the author gave him a little bit of human traits and not just blood lust and Power-hungry into his personality it could be a good book also how are you going to be shy but you’re gonna like two children kill each other I just don’t get it MC contradicts himself multiple times make another book preferably for me on DC and make the MC not too kind but not a not a 100% asshole that deserves to be eaten by A tiger a wolf and a hippo at the same time while still alive and without further do that one will leave it off

3yr
Bingey
BingeyLv3

yup that should be it. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 👍

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Filah08
Filah08Lv2

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS NOVEL🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️

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The_Dao
The_DaoLv12

😢please continue 🙏 😢.....................................................................................................................

3yr
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