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Let's get this straight it's a GREAT story. Rhea who is our mc here is strong will gets transfer into another world with her brother victor (He is good looking). There reàltionship isn't great but they still have trust between them. Magic exists in this world. Both of them are going to meet with good, bad and grey people. Let's see their journey. Writing Quality - It's great, believe me when I say I felt the eerie silence of that forest or the chilling cold. There are almost no grammatical mistakes that I noticed, story telling is great. Story development - It under the mist for most part in first few chapters but the curtains are rising slowly. It seems slow in first chapters but our leads and us readers are just understanding the situation both brother and sister are in. Character Design - Rhea our mc's emotions are what we see the most. She is a noble lady of a household her relationship with her brother. Flashbacks of what her mother told her about. How she admires a certain soldier woman! It all so great, She is a strong willed lady. Side character - (I know I should be writing about victor) The side character are deeply thought. Like how the soldiers first reaction was to look down at Rhea. It's really a normal phenomenon at war or boarders, a heavy topic to the readers. World background - It's detail there doesn't seems to be info dumping. Will I recommend this story? Yes but remember this. Despite being a isekai/transmigration series it seems to be targeted towards young adult or new adults. The plot is deeply thought, might not be for some readers who love light plots. At some points it literally makes you think. Unlike keeping the relation between brother and sister either good or bad it's grey like any normal real life relationship. Keep up great work author.😁👍