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Brian_Hanes_117
Brian_Hanes_117Lv13yr
2021-06-25 12:36

A very good story with an interesting plot. The writing formatting and grammar could use some minor improvements. The characters are great and the humor is solid. Dialogue is great. I like the African side of this story, it really makes it stand out. Love scenes are well described and you keep it interesting throughout. Also feel free to check out my fanon spin-off story Avatar: Macai's Journey if you like Action/Adventure stuff (with some romance).

THE SECRETARY

Precious_Onwe
4.9
224 Chs

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Precious_Onwe
Precious_OnweAuthor

Thank you. I will find ways to improve my writting format and grammar. and I will definitely check out that book! who doesn't love a good adventure with a touch of romance!!!.

3yr
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veronica_nunoo
veronica_nunooLv11

Wow what a superb story err author u r too much . I loved every bit of this story. I would love that you update from time to time in order to get votes and other stuffs.hope to read other novels from you❤️❤️

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Michael_Diana
Michael_DianaLv1

The book has great potential and I feel like there's passion that the writer put in both characters in the story, I love McKenna and Jason maybe stuck up in chapter one, but he definitely gives a chance at something more than just words and general actions like he did with chapter one so I will be sticking around until the end.

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extyfortune
extyfortuneLv5

this is a wonderful story, suspense filled and entertaining , I still can not believe it has ended. I really enjoyed me self reading this novel. thanks precious for this piece.

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Shiku_mama_9731
Shiku_mama_9731Lv4

Awesome story! I can't wait to finish reading and see if the lead couple ends up together. Good writing quality the story is fast passed. This book has very good potential!

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SerafinaF
SerafinaFLv13

I enjoyed reading this story. It has a good plot line and some very likable characters. I look forward to more chapters from you. Best of luck with the novel, author.

3yr
Chinasa_okwu
Chinasa_okwuLv1

I love the way we see the story through different ML.********************** Jason and McKenna are good for each other just like light and darkness************************************************ truth be told, i am liking this Naya girl and even though i am rooting for Mckenna, i want her to be with Jason as well keep updating!!! it a good read

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MizA
MizALv10

I liked the protagonist because she seems to be a down-to-heart person, which is not so common in novels. She's loveable in the little things. Unfortunately she's chosen as a toy for a playboy, but I hope he matures once he sees what wonderful woman she is. Promise us, author, he'll not mistreat her too much! I found the pace of this story good and I liked how the events developed in a non forceful way. Although I had problems understanding where the novel is set, it's just me not being well travelled enough LOL. I usually don't like tags announcing the change of POV, when there's such a thing, but it's a peeve of mine. The author writes in a sensible manner, not delivering too much and spoiling the surprises! Good job, good luck!

3yr
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