Review Detail of VRW1 in Spy Lover

I like the main character way of thinking and the smoothness of this character making joke is good undercover work but too common. The plot seem like I know what going to happen but if it change then it will be a good plot twist. The grammer need some work. some paragraphs don't have periods and some first words isn't Cap, but the more you write the more you get better. Just keep going author and best of luck.