k how do I say it😌🍹 I don't comment or review mostly but now I felt like I should just do itm you have a good writing style author I like the way you write fights. clearly only few characters are introduced till now it makes easy for me to not get confused.

K, I am truly impressed by this novel. it was an amazing story line! the more chapters I read, the more interesting and amazing the story gets. the more story progresses the better it gets. yes while reading it feels like the chapters are short and in one chapter you read nothing which make you wanna read more and more chapters in less time. By that, I don't mean that the author pulls his story, no. it has an amazing pace. everything in this story, by my opinion, has happened for a reason. sooner or later, you know the reason why it happened. Good work, author. Keep producing more chapters. thank you.

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I’m really interested in this story because the summary is very captivating. But i got thrown off by the ‘harem’ tag. Dear lord, nothing is worse than when reading d*mn good book, but got suddenly distrupted by passive agressive tsunderes or stubborn legal lolis. Thus, unecessary shallow arguments and misunderstandings ensues that drags on and onnnn😩 Can anyone please tell me how the harem aspect going to impact the overall story? (I put neutral 4 stars on all categories as i haven’t read the book yet)

Hello Author, I noticed thatbypu like to use quaint and rarely use words which do indeed give the novel a unique and flashy feel but I would advice you to not use them any further unless you can suddenly increase your writing skills by a large margin because using flashy words when your writing skills are not quite there yet will make it harder for you to keep up the 89 same pace and quality of the story. It will make it harder for you to explain certain scenarios without constantly referencing which will give important scenes a rigid feel. sincerely, a fellow aspiring writer.

I'm one of those "silent or ghost readers" I don't comment or review much. I just wanted to tell the author that please improve your writing quality

I am writing yet another review to thanks all the people who are voting for this novel, commenting and letting me know your thoughts, writing a review, and most importantly... for adding this novel into your library. It means a lot thanks very much really. I look forward for your support.

Got to the second chapter before I had to put this down. Author, too much inconsistency. Stating the MC can't react in time and gets knocked out by a little kid. Then saying he has super speed as a trait. Later he dodges bullets and knocks out a grown man with a rock. 20 kph is actually slow, look it up. Ryan is 16 but he acts and thinks like an 8 year old. The police would never leave a minor alone in their house after their parents death. He would be ushered to his next of kin or whoever's agreed to take care of him. A little advice- use google to find out facts before you start writing and stating things as if they are truth. Can't help but imagine someone running full out but moving like a geriatric with a walker. I wish you good luck with your novel, and every thing.

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