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2021-06-07 00:29

I am enjoying this story so far... Great development of plot.. There is spirits, beasts, reincarnation which made this story more interesting. what piqued my Intrest the most was MC's last life... although there is no details about his last life till now, but from the looks of it, I know it will be filled with Mysteries. I also want to know about MC's relationship with the mysterious lady!! Please speed up the update and let us, the readers, enjoy your story!!

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Writing Quality: There are some minor mistakes but the real problem I have is that the writing isn't really smooth, I can't just feel the story when I read it, the quality is average Story development: So, the mc is not really mature, which I prefer, but he is still a child so it is acceptable. There are a few things I really don't like, first the stuff with his mother and her family, that was just wierd and you should change the story because it doesn't make sense. Second is the trust with his teacher, nobody should trust each other so easily, I mean yes the teacher knows his secret, but we don't know why she is helping him, is it because she is special herself? And that she just trusted him so fast don't make sense. Character design: He is immature, childish and a bit stupid, I hope he will get soon mature and the bearing of a true king and get stronger soon. I don't really like stupid characters, and his lying skills are so bad, and that nobody can tell that he is lying with his cultivation techniqe is really sad and should be changed. Update stability: 8 chapters a week is really good, I can't complain with that, 5 stars for that. World background: We only know that the universe is really big and we can't comprehend how big it truly is, we know that his planet is nothing but a small planet which is really weak. Hope to get more informations for that, but it is still just the sart of the story. Overall: The story has potential, but the problems which I explained, is the reason I will drop this novel, I just don't like the writing style, I can't bring myself to read it or pay for the chapters. I would recommend you to give it a try if you want, the first 40 chapters are free.

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