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2023-12-09 10:27

The book needs to be proofread and edited. This is not quality work. Even if you use Machine Translation to translate this book, be a conscientious businessman and not defraud us of money to purchase such shoddy and horrible work. The female characters are all called Wifey.. 2nd Wife etc when they are in fact unmarried, single young girls in their early teens. There are even repetitive words that make up an entire paragraph which you would see when your MTL fails to translate the paragraph well. Pronouns used for correct genders are all over the place. Not to mention, the characters’ name being interchangeable with one another. This keeps you confuse on who was talking to who. Anyway, this horrible and shoddy work really made it difficult for me to read the book. Several times I have to halt my reading and cleanse my eyes with other books. The concept itself is good but the FL mind reading could only be use upon skin contact. The Villain, FL Cousin, is a reborn character. She is truly unlikeable. With Xiao Baoxin and her past life husband Yang Shao, I just pity the guy. He truly fell for her but why then did he betray her in their past life. And now in his current life, he was forced to be with that 2nd Lady Xiao. Read at your own risk. Not worth spending coins or FPs to unlock the chapters if you ask me.

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JesReadin
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Good review ty. I can see that for all that the concept is good, the execution would drive me nuts 😅

Immortal_Goddess
Immortal_GoddessLv15

It drove me nuts. I’m kind of OCD correcting those errors…. Just tiring…😅🥺

JesReadin:Good review ty. I can see that for all that the concept is good, the execution would drive me nuts 😅
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