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Poppys_Flower2020Lv151yr
2023-06-23 05:01

The synopsis is very intriguing and the premis of the story is in and of itself great. Unfortunately, the execution is... lackluster at best. I read up to chapter 21 and now I am giving up. The writing is so messy, I can hardly keep up with all the backgroud info for each new character, sudden change of POV (without any indication) and the characters relationships with eachother. I read quite a few chinese novels. I know how it goes. All the extra drama, filler chapters, random subplots that may or may not get resolved and sometimes even character arcs. I mean, it is cliche but entertaining. What I cannot stand is the chaotic structure of how this is written. It made my head ache. Which is a shame, cause I truly thought this might be something. But I am not going to put myself through 100 more chapters... otherwise I may just have to rob a pharmacy for aspirin.

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Missdashiella
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So it's not just me!

ZoMeow
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Ahh at least i found my same partner .. Because of fake review it is hard to understand is my taste has some problems 😐😐😐

QueenFK_B
QueenFK_BLv15

Thank you! I thought i was lacking sleep or something! I couldn’t follow the plot or pacing of this book at all and it’s hella confusing. It actually gave me a headache trying to understand what i was reading. I gave up at chapter 18.

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