It's good! Especially the character design and the world background. You're in for a beautifully imagined fantasy world, told through the eyes of a young lady in great detail. Maybe you'll consider the pace slow, but it's 100% needed. It serves to build a world that is much different from ours. It's a good read and I actually like the characters. The author has a great imagination, doubt. Her universe differs significantly from classic fantasy, and yet, everything fits.

the worldbuilding is rich and solid. each of the characters have their own distinct personalities which make them shine individually. the writing is also of high quality, and the use of descriptions were immersive and narrated wonderfully. i'm interested to learn more about the world and the people the MC(for non-spoiler reasons) meets! good job and keep it up :)

The chapters are short but they are beautifully structured and wonderfully written. There are little to no grammatical errors making this novel a very very easy and understandable read. As the story progressed I couldn't help but keep reading. The author paid keen attention to character development and certainly kept me intrigued. A lovely lovely novel 🤗

I'm impressed on the updating of the story so far! There are a lot of great points in the writing starting from Chapter 1. I do like how the author separates between the 1st POV and 3rd POV. And the reader isn't jarred because of it. I do have a nick pick though- When fleeing for one's life, the body enters a fight or flight mode. These modes are full of adrenaline and your heart will be thumping really fast, but light pain will seem to disappear. It all comes flooding back once you come down from the adrenaline. I do highly recommend this story and I wish the author good luck with the updates!

The story grasps the attention of the reader from the first moment. A well written protagonist makes is definitely a plus for me. However, the writing style could use some work.

This is a really enjoyable adventure. I love the fictional world the author has created here. The glossary at the start is quite handy to give the reader an idea of what kinds of beings will inhabit the universe and get them into the right frame of mind. The characters in this are all colorful, diverse and unique, making this feel like a very substantial piece of fiction that is well-developed and carried by the author's fantastic imagination. The writing style is light and snappy, making for an easy and enjoyable read at any time of the day. There are some light traces of humor throughout too, further adding to the fun, and breaking up some of the more serious moments. I love the direction where this is heading and it is safe to say this story is in good hands with a very talented author. Everybody reading this should check this story out ASAP!

This was a good read. The writing quality was pretty good and probably better than most wn. The plot moved smoothly (good pacing). And if you like Light novels, then this is your jam. I'd totally recommend this.

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Your writing style is superb among the authors here in Webnovel (or even in other platforms. The occurrences in the story are all detailed and well-written, so I expect this novel to bloom in no time! You could even join one of the contest in webnovel, mate, and win awesome goodies while you're at it! These are the few things that I'd like to point out, so feel free to disagree or agree with what I'm going to say. I noticed that you add -kun during dialogues, but it was not consistent. It would be better if all of the characters there (assuming they're all Japanese) uses proper honorics at each characters. The scenes were epic and written excellently! However, there are some few sentences here and there that you I think you missed showing than telling (for me) There is part where you mentioned "couldn't sooth Hatayo's anxiousness". It would be better if you can express it in details rather than telling he was anxious. Also, you could replace some adverbs in the story with a richer verb. One example (from your chapters) that I found was "boots clanked loudly" you could say that the boots blared a clanking sounds or along those lines. This is definitely well-written! I love the story, and I can't wait to read more about this!