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Review Detail of Officepony in Practicing Basic Sorcery for Billions of Times Made Me Invincible

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I rate this story so low because it has a lack of consistency. The translation is inconsistent, the story sets up plots and then suddenly throws in a solution that was never mentioned until the author decides to solve it with some item that only gets mentioned when it gets used, characters quickly become irrelevant as the mc plows through cultivation levels meaning the character development never has time to happen. The story itself is basically just a cultivation novel with with names westernized and the cultivation swapped out with 'magic' though since the move names are basically all Wuxia sounding I'm guessing that's exactly what happened.

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Practicing Basic Sorcery for Billions of Times Made Me Invincible

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