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Officepony

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An avid lover of fiction. Give me your Fantasy! Your Sci-fi! You Romance! I'll even take your yaoi and other junk if that's all you got, just keep 'em coming.

2017-12-14 JoinedGuam
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  • Officepony
    Officepony1yr
    Posted

    Honestly, this is hot garbage. The kind that you have to give a second sniff after backing away from just because it confused your nose the first time. It jumps into shit really fast, tells you that the MC is intelligent but only shows you a few slightly above average plays. The scenarios and everything really strain your belief in the world the author is weaving, making you want to ask what this bullshit is.

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    Starting By Acting As A Bank Robber, I Shock The World
    Urban · Second Brother Langya
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  • Officepony
    Officepony2yr
    Commented

    Just seeing the title gave me flashbacks. Gangly limbed mouth monster...

    Ch 765 Who Dares to Call Me an Entertainment Streamer? Watch Me Open the Treasure Chest
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    Black Tech Internet Cafe System
    Eastern · The Leaf That Goes Against Water
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  • Officepony
    Officepony2yr
    Replied to Riimuru

    this was my first thought, then my second thought was, "He didn't even bother letting her know he was dipping out." Straight up ditched after tapping dat ash.

    Ch 22 Blazing Flame Mercenary Corps
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    Forging The Path To Godliness
    Eastern · King Demigod
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  • Officepony
    Officepony2yr
    Commented

    I cracked up when they said the type 81 was their most reliable domestically produced gun. There's some truth to that since it was an AK clone, but then the manufacturing of the guns and what was actually distributed were waaaaayyyy too iffy to use the word reliable xD

    Ch 664 Teaching Her A Lesson
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    Reborn at Boot Camp: General, Don't Mess Around!
    Urban · Straight to the Blue Skies
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  • Officepony
    Officepony2yr
    Replied to Officepony

    300+ chapters with very little in the way of actual resolution.

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    Dear Commander-in-Chief
    Urban · Cloud Lady
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  • Officepony
    Officepony2yr
    Posted

    Honestly, I want to like this more than I actually do. The problems come from the extremely slow burn with the revenge plots. Every encounter that would be world shattering to an MC seems to slide right by as the antagonists constantly skim by until they ultimately bite the bullet. likely the ending will be very gratifying and change my opinion but at the moment with 200+ chapters it feels unsatisfying with the amount of resolution and constant compounding of suppression onto the MC. If the ending is done right this won't be a bad thing though, so I can only pray.

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    Dear Commander-in-Chief
    Urban · Cloud Lady
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  • Officepony
    Officepony2yr
    Commented

    Feels like either the translation is getting funky or my brain is giving out.

    Ch 189 Galactic Tournament
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    Deity Hero: Me! Gaining Disciples Makes Me Stronger!
    Eastern · Master Laugh
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  • Officepony
    Officepony2yr
    Commented

    Serious drop in translation quality from already subpar quality. Meng En.

    Ch 27 Killing without Batting an Eye
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    As A Cardinal, I Don't Do Overtime
    Fantasy · Southsky Star
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  • Officepony
    Officepony2yr
    Posted

    I found the early chapters really enjoyable, mid way the antagonists and general populace seems to become more irrational and mentally insufficient. Seriously, the 'netizens' have really short term memories. As usual, things get really repetitive, and the decisions making is kinda far-fetched but the face slapping is just as satisfying as it should be.

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    The Mysterious Heiress: Researcher In Disguise
    Urban · Unfinished Circle
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  • Officepony
    Officepony2yr
    Replied to aquariushege

    Been noticing this with a lot of the "Translations" and it makes the story feel really unnatural. The reactions and world setting get ruined when they do this kind of stuff.

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    I Experienced an SSS Encryption
    Urban · Little Brother Langya
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  • Officepony
    Officepony2yr
    Commented

    The fact that the information reaches anyone in the military in less than three months makes this grossly inaccurate.

    Ch 5 This Is! A Body Tempering Technique?
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    I Experienced an SSS Encryption
    Urban · Little Brother Langya
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  • Officepony
    Officepony2yr
    Replied to Primordial

    Honestly feels like they ran a random wuxia novel through a machine translator then a wordprocessor and replaced all the usual cultivation jargon and Chinese names with their western equivalent to cheat a plagiarism algorithm.

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    Practicing Basic Sorcery for Billions of Times Made Me Invincible
    Fantasy · Abundance Every Year
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  • Officepony
    Officepony2yr
    Posted

    I rate this story so low because it has a lack of consistency. The translation is inconsistent, the story sets up plots and then suddenly throws in a solution that was never mentioned until the author decides to solve it with some item that only gets mentioned when it gets used, characters quickly become irrelevant as the mc plows through cultivation levels meaning the character development never has time to happen. The story itself is basically just a cultivation novel with with names westernized and the cultivation swapped out with 'magic' though since the move names are basically all Wuxia sounding I'm guessing that's exactly what happened.

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    Practicing Basic Sorcery for Billions of Times Made Me Invincible
    Fantasy · Abundance Every Year
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  • Officepony
    Officepony2yr
    Commented

    It feels like the Violet blood monster type keeps changing every time it is mentioned, or is it a different unmentioned gain each time?

    Ch 50 The Demoness’Coffin. Alice Became the Demoness of the Seven Deadly Sins!
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    Practicing Basic Sorcery for Billions of Times Made Me Invincible
    Fantasy · Abundance Every Year
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  • Officepony
    Officepony2yr
    Commented

    There should be some kind of tag or pop up before spending coins on stories like these that were ended early or dropped. The sheer disappointment that I spent money on an unfinished story when the coins could have gone to something slightly more complete. Now that my grievances have been aired, it felt like the story was setting up for such grand things, yet nothing was really realized aside from gaining a slight foothold in the music industry. The Cao family remains dominant, the Ling family will likely be controlled by the brat with some bloody intervention by the Cao family head, and the music industry seems to still be a backwards place that only MC is able to make a difference in. So many plot hooks with no rod and reel to pull them out of the water. I enjoyed everything aside from the abrupt Nom-Ending we got, even the very familiar second artists betrayal since it felt like the setup for ruining New Century's ability to poach from anyone after the second living proof that they mess up anyone they take in. While it was regrettable that I spent so many coins on this with my limited budget it was still a nice read while it lasted

    Ch 240 Authors Note - Afterword
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    Rebirth of the Entertainment Giant
    Urban · David_Tieku
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  • Officepony
    Officepony3yr
    Replied to dear_insanity

    Dirty boi

    Ch 3 Becoming a Cultivator
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    Cultivation Online
    Games · MyLittleBrother
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  • Officepony
    Officepony3yr
    Commented

    Really enjoying this thus far.

    Ch 3 Becoming a Cultivator
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    Cultivation Online
    Games · MyLittleBrother
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