Yo! Chart— Writing: 4.0 Story: 4.5 Characters: 4.6 Update: (Not sure yet, but since the author posted 6 chapters on the first day, so this is good in my book!) World Background: 4.6 Before you ask, "Wait, the novel just came out, why is this guy already giving out ratings like that?" I would like to add that I am one of the lucky people who was granted the chance to read up to chapter 20 by the generous author! I am not really a critique, but I would say this is a good novel. The start was a tad bit confusing (for me), but that feeling soon disappeared as the story progressed. While the author is new, he is passionate about what he is doing. A slight heads up (spoiler): The start would be a little slow, but it picks up the pace. And finally, MC HAS YORUICHI POWERS!!!

"I love Doggo's big booty, but not his cliffs ! thx for the chapter 👍" - Wolfstar14

Ahem I'm just here to shamelessly simp for a rabbit girl ..................................................................................

Author hosed up third chapter by nerfing mc instead of just letting him have powers that were scaled to world. Gods hosed mc over bu wasting his wishes.

An assassin or evil mc's whole point is that they are forces of evil that let go of their moral compass and advance towards their future unhindered by everything that made them chained. The author made his MC an assassin mc, I really felt that he was an assassin due to his calm and rational persona, until "Character Development" came along, Author made him attached to people, the same guy that was taught from a young age that you can't trust anyone but yourself trusting others? Author, this was pretty disappointing...Good Luck in your Fanfiction.

I am personally a fan of MHA and I like the fact that this fic began way before canon. It allows so many possible changes. As long as the author don't give up I am sure the story will be great. As of now though the story is slowly settling the base. We get to know the mc His personality and his power. I am really happy about the fact that he won't suddenly become super OP. I was a little worried because bleach and MHA simply shouldn't be compared. You have city level in MHA. Meanwhile you have multi planetary in bleach and some people who can wreck dimensions. So yeah. 😂😂😂 Thankfully the author is simply a fan of Yoruichi and took some inspiration from her power. For those who may worries. There's no gender bender and mc is a man.

Alright, I just read it all in one go. Not an expert at writing reviews so I will keep it short and simple. We get to see some backstory of the main character before he is reincarnated. it can be a good thing or not a good thing depending on the situation but I'd say it's on the good side here. it gives a better grasp of the main character's background. The way to give him Yoru's powers is also quite reasonable in my opinion, very interesting and funny. As for writing and grammar, it is pretty good, much better than a lot of things on this site. You won't be finding any obvious errors that make the reading experience less satisfactory. All in all, it is quite enjoyable and a fun read. Recommended to give it at least a try. Ah yes, there is another incentive to read — the "gathering of women as partners" and the "*content* related to the gathering". Personally, I'm not quite fond of them but many people like them. (please forgive me for my choice of words as Webnovel, for some reason, does not allow me the liberty to even use the proper terms.)

An amazing fic with big potential and knowing author its gonna be very very good. ...................................................................

its definitely a five star for me just from the premise hope its continue like this, keep up the good work ...................................................................