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JokerHighJack
JokerHighJackLv103yrJokerHighJack

This review is made after chapter 10. Sadly i am going to have to drop this because of chapter 10. Honestly this was a five star story until chapter 10. With what that chapter does its makes the previous chapters useless an a waste of time to read. Its honestly a big slap to the face to all the readers. Its really sad as well because this was one of the best and most original Twilight FanFics i have read and it just gets tossed away like it doesnt matter. All for the main character to get reincarnated like every other twilight fanfic with his memories taken away as an added bonus.

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Reincarnated into twilight unknowingly.

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RaGnAr_SK
RaGnAr_SKLv4RaGnAr_SK

dude the Memories would be back again in some point. now would be really boring If they stayed like that this early.....the story would be finished in chapter 9.THIS a love story, drama is necessary.......and this Twist is original (for me at least). i hope you continue Reading .....

JokerHighJack
JokerHighJackLv10JokerHighJack

I think there could have been a better way to do it. Also their could have been other ways to bring him into the right time of the Twilight movies or books. Also its never fun to read when a God has so much control over your mind.

RaGnAr_SK:dude the Memories would be back again in some point. now would be really boring If they stayed like that this early.....the story would be finished in chapter 9.THIS a love story, drama is necessary.......and this Twist is original (for me at least). i hope you continue Reading .....
RaGnAr_SK
RaGnAr_SKLv4RaGnAr_SK

i understand your point, sure could be a better way to bring them to Canon Twilight, but the MC would be Just a expectator of the story, this Twist of the author helps in insert him in the story with buildind drama and romance, wouldnt be boring If they stayed together hapily until the end of the story??

RaGnAr_SK
RaGnAr_SKLv4RaGnAr_SK

and Will be funny they falling in love and hate each other until he remembers her.

JokerHighJack:I think there could have been a better way to do it. Also their could have been other ways to bring him into the right time of the Twilight movies or books. Also its never fun to read when a God has so much control over your mind.
peterman00
peterman00Lv1peterman00

This is exactly what I feel.

RainInNight
RainInNightLv13RainInNight

Read chapter 11-12 so far so good

JokerHighJack
JokerHighJackLv10JokerHighJack

I have and i am not impressed honestly. i really did give it a try but the whole thing for me personally is ruined. If people like it they like it i just wanted to give an honest review

RainInNight:Read chapter 11-12 so far so good
RainInNight
RainInNightLv13RainInNight

I know that why i said 11-12 good so far so some people who may like it won’t quit to soon and just check it oir

JokerHighJack:I have and i am not impressed honestly. i really did give it a try but the whole thing for me personally is ruined. If people like it they like it i just wanted to give an honest review
newthings
newthingsLv6newthings

memory loss is too cliche

ghustV
ghustVLv5ghustV

It is implicit in the reincarnation tag that you have meta-knowledge or an outsider perspective (that's what ppl expect to see). If an reincarnated does not have it, then the history is about an OC.

venomwave
venomwaveLv12venomwave

eh... no? the mc may be reincarnated in a story without knowing , reincarnation has nothing to do with meta kwnoledge , an oc may also be reincarnated without meta knowledge , those are not mutually exclusive wheter he is reincarnated in a fictional story or not... you are just salty the mc doesn't remember twilight.

ghustV:It is implicit in the reincarnation tag that you have meta-knowledge or an outsider perspective (that's what ppl expect to see). If an reincarnated does not have it, then the history is about an OC.
ghustV
ghustVLv5ghustV

Wow, such a genius!... you and I are reincarnated MCS from fanfic too... WhAt? You don't remember... such a downer.

venomwave:eh... no? the mc may be reincarnated in a story without knowing , reincarnation has nothing to do with meta kwnoledge , an oc may also be reincarnated without meta knowledge , those are not mutually exclusive wheter he is reincarnated in a fictional story or not... you are just salty the mc doesn't remember twilight.
EnderPL
EnderPLLv6EnderPL

Hahahhahahahhahahahhaha

ghustV:Wow, such a genius!... you and I are reincarnated MCS from fanfic too... WhAt? You don't remember... such a downer.
Transhumanist
TranshumanistLv14Transhumanist

Too true bro. I feel like I am a reincarnator too with hefty karma deficit.

ghustV:Wow, such a genius!... you and I are reincarnated MCS from fanfic too... WhAt? You don't remember... such a downer.
Ouroboros001
Ouroboros001Lv11Ouroboros001

Nice save. thanks

Should_Be_Working
Should_Be_WorkingLv3Should_Be_Working

If he has no memories for an extended period, you might as well just made an oc no? Then you dont have to worry about how to explain the reincarnation stuff (god I hate the ROB or god & wishes troupe) and the readers would get to see how the oc mc lives through and affects the world him/her.

RaGnAr_SK:dude the Memories would be back again in some point. now would be really boring If they stayed like that this early.....the story would be finished in chapter 9.THIS a love story, drama is necessary.......and this Twist is original (for me at least). i hope you continue Reading .....