Honestly I love your story, but I can’t continue reading. You make the same very small mistake each chapter hundreds of times and I just can not stand seeing it anymore. He’s = He is. His = belonging to or associated with a male person or animal previously mentioned or easily identified.
Uchiha_Lover21
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LIKERaGnAr_SK:The important is understand the story and what the words meant, so Far this objective has been achieved.