Review Detail of Shooky_VSiga in Butterflies and Pins

First I want to thank you so much for giving this story a chance. Secondly, I apologize that my Yoon-Yi frustrated you to this extent 😅 In my defence, I want to say that I am not a fan of OP characters, or flawless, perfect FL who know exactly how to act from the first few chapters. Besides this being my first long project, I also wanted her to act realistic in those circumstances. She traveled into the past, she was shocked. She didn't transmigrate and doesn't have the other person's memories or anything. She is still herself. It was also a time of great danger and she wasn't used to how things worked. She was also a noble lady who wouldn't be allowed to fight even if she wanted to. But I wanted her to eventually grow and she really does. she will become strong for those she loves. What breaks my heart a little is that you didn't want to stick till the end to see her grow into a woman who can be strong on her own. She was weak from the beginning, starting with her uncertainties about her future in the 21st century and the fear of moving far from home. Now, how could a person like that be awesome and strong in the 14-15th century? Still, as a fellow reader and kdrama lover I understand your frustrations and I apologize for giving these negative feelings 😔 I hope you'll find my future projects more to your liking. Though one thing you may notice is that this author likes to create flawed characters who eventually grow into becoming a better version of themselves. Wish you a wonderful day and thank you so much for reading and for all your comments and review! Your feedback means a lot! 💕

Tbh when I started reading this, I think in the 20th chapter or something when Shin told Yoon Yi not to leave the carriage or whatever it was, she does that despite that and Jung Hee also warns her not to and also the two river bank scenes as well she is saved by Shin, even during their journey she climbs the slope and tumbles down again saved by him and all were due to her stupidity.... and the final one where Shin protects her from the arrow I remembered Hwarang kdrama where Park Seojoon saves Go Ara from the arrow. I remembered that and after so many kdramas, I always see the same troupe where women are always saved by men so somehow I guess I saw Yoon yi that way and I wanted her to be atleast careful and alert I don't want her to be strong but atleast sensible... so I was kinda disappointed...

Oh I watched that kdrama as well. I really liked it. Now, coming back to my Yoon-Yi, unfortunately I wanted her to do that last one and Shin had to be hurt because of her. Because people don't always change because they realize things by themselves but because of a shock. So Yoon-Yi had to be shocked into finally realizing that her actions can put those around her in danger. Yes, you were right in saying that she just avoided thinking about her situation. Because she simply wanted to return home, she just didn't want to get used to being there or stick around much. But after these events happen she changes her mind. I admit it was something I willingly created. Never expected it will bring about so much frustration to my readers so I apologize 😅

Maybe it's only me getting frustrated! I think the others love the story...its just that i am too picky about novels...sometimes I get too frustrated because of small things 🤣🤣🤣 but yeah like you said I understand your thoughts hopefully I will pick it up later lets see 👀 Anyways your writing quality is top notch author keep it up!

And thanks for being kind with me and explaining your thoughts and idea behind the novel it's really interesting to know a writer's POV!!!

We all have our own preferences so it's alright 😁🤭I am also like this sometimes with certain stories. I hope you'll enjoy it in the end of you ever decide to try it again. And thank you so much! That makes me very happy and confident. I'll do my best! 🥰

You're most welcome! I'm glad it didn't annoy you... all my explanations and replies 😅I get it that sometimes people can't imagine what was the reasoning behind a certain scene or character so I like to talk about it. I also know that people are different, we all like and react to different things. Thus we also see certain actions from different perspectives. As a writer it's interesting to me seeing the readers' different reactions to my stories 😁🤭I would love it if they learn something from them or if they feel a certain emotion.

Definitely was an interesting and refreshing discussion that we had and sometimes I forget that the characters that the authors like you, try to portray are not one dimensional and have their own thoughts, feelings and flaws which is basic human nature and if you want to know their story, you just have to tag along in the journey and see it happen!!!! I will definitely give it a chance! Thanks 😊