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Swiftescape
SwiftescapeLv153yrSwiftescape

So before I begin this review I want to say a few things. 1. This is my own opinion and feelings on this story as of right now (it may change later). 2. My score is relative to the material on this site (meaning a 5 on webnovel does not equal a 5 on a published book on Amazon). Review: It's been a genuinely long time since I've read an original story that has a well crafted setup with an evil protagonist. So when I found this I was naturally quite happy. Unlike most other originals on this site the author takes care to first introduce you to the MC (who in turn reveals the world to the reader). It's actually quite sad how many authors skip this seemingly insignificant step. With this introduction we begin to build a connection with the protagonist and begin to understand his motives, thoughts and feelings. With this understanding breeds acceptance (and excitement for some select individuals). This makes it much easier for the audience to enjoy and continue on reading even further. After understanding his motives and thoughts we begin to see the real magic of this story. How the protagonist reacts and deals with the people and circumstances around him. The author conveys this conflict magnificently. The audience anticipates on what will happen next knowing what we know. And then we enjoy the events that happen later as a result of this conflict. To be able to craft such a setup is a rarity not often seen on this site (which is unfortunate). The reason I will give you on why you should read this story is this (it's simple really). It's an evil protagonist story that will leave you wanting more. More conflict, more introspection, more murder, more deception, more manipulation, more depravity, more INSANITY. It's really unfortunate I'm not able to read a chapter every day to satisfy my wants. Oh well I'll find solace in the fact that the one who reads this review and tries this story out for themselves will eventually (if not sooner) turn out just like me... Overall it's good try it! Current Score: 4.6

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I'll show you a Villain

M_Lexi2

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Swiftescape
SwiftescapeLv15Swiftescape

Oops almost forgot, this story is also readable and has good grammar. Shocking isn't it?

M_Lexi2
M_Lexi2AuthorM_Lexi2

Thank you for the review, I'm glad you're liking the set up and the character building. I started writing this on the side while preparing my debut novel irl, I never expected it to be received so well. I'm so glad you're enjoying it and I guarantee much more depravity.

Phoenic
PhoenicLv12Phoenic

At first your novel had my interest. Then you used a code geass gif. Now you have my attention.

M_Lexi2:Thank you for the review, I'm glad you're liking the set up and the character building. I started writing this on the side while preparing my debut novel irl, I never expected it to be received so well. I'm so glad you're enjoying it and I guarantee much more depravity.
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Ummmname
UmmmnameLv15Ummmname

can you do reviews for every book on this app 😆

Swiftescape
SwiftescapeLv15Swiftescape

Oh definitely not🤣. I only do reviews on stories that I have strong feelings for (whether good or bad).

Ummmname:can you do reviews for every book on this app 😆
Moodacle_tm_2
Moodacle_tm_2Lv3Moodacle_tm_2

yeah i like it too but do you think the guy who wrote this had aham experience

Swiftescape
SwiftescapeLv15Swiftescape

Rather than real life experiences. I believe the author draws the inspiration from similar media and real life occurrences.

Moodacle_tm_2:yeah i like it too but do you think the guy who wrote this had aham experience
Shadowmamba
ShadowmambaLv4Shadowmamba

Now you got me puMped up for your debut novel, i found This a bit too late but anyways, i wish you the best of luck![img=recommend][img=recommend]

M_Lexi2:Thank you for the review, I'm glad you're liking the set up and the character building. I started writing this on the side while preparing my debut novel irl, I never expected it to be received so well. I'm so glad you're enjoying it and I guarantee much more depravity.
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callmeotooosan
callmeotooosanLv3callmeotooosan

uwu i love Lelouch , and i love this story tooo

M_Lexi2:Thank you for the review, I'm glad you're liking the set up and the character building. I started writing this on the side while preparing my debut novel irl, I never expected it to be received so well. I'm so glad you're enjoying it and I guarantee much more depravity.
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DaddysWetPuthy
DaddysWetPuthyLv13DaddysWetPuthy

Author, is there romance? (I prefer no romance but i just need to know ahead of time to prepare myself lol)

M_Lexi2:Thank you for the review, I'm glad you're liking the set up and the character building. I started writing this on the side while preparing my debut novel irl, I never expected it to be received so well. I'm so glad you're enjoying it and I guarantee much more depravity.
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0THeunkown0
0THeunkown0Lv40THeunkown0

any similar story or apathetic mc like this ,can any give any recommendations (iron blood mc is also apathetic, pretty good one)

Swiftescape
SwiftescapeLv15Swiftescape

Check out my evil protagonists list on my profile

0THeunkown0:any similar story or apathetic mc like this ,can any give any recommendations (iron blood mc is also apathetic, pretty good one)
0THeunkown0
0THeunkown0Lv40THeunkown0

there is this one mutation madness r smth ,I think it is evil not completely sure as there are only 30 r so chps in starting mc kinds of snaps leading t slaughtng his parents , can't say evil r different personalities mmm, mm

Cursed_sin
Cursed_sinLv12Cursed_sin

One spoiler question Will mc have a happy ending? Sorry it’s just i don’t do too well with sad ending once im emotionally invested in the character

M_Lexi2:Thank you for the review, I'm glad you're liking the set up and the character building. I started writing this on the side while preparing my debut novel irl, I never expected it to be received so well. I'm so glad you're enjoying it and I guarantee much more depravity.
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peace01
peace01Lv1peace01

Is it fantasy?

_BLACK
_BLACKLv4_BLACK

yo author harem ?

M_Lexi2:Thank you for the review, I'm glad you're liking the set up and the character building. I started writing this on the side while preparing my debut novel irl, I never expected it to be received so well. I'm so glad you're enjoying it and I guarantee much more depravity.
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RainbowBeheader
RainbowBeheaderLv13RainbowBeheader

harem or monogamy?

M_Lexi2:Thank you for the review, I'm glad you're liking the set up and the character building. I started writing this on the side while preparing my debut novel irl, I never expected it to be received so well. I'm so glad you're enjoying it and I guarantee much more depravity.
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M_Lexi2
M_Lexi2AuthorM_Lexi2

So like I’m too lazy to write that many characters.

RainbowBeheader:harem or monogamy?
wake_up_mr_sparrow
wake_up_mr_sparrowLv13wake_up_mr_sparrow

And now I'm sold! Thank you so much, dear Author 😍

M_Lexi2:So like I’m too lazy to write that many characters.
Gulf_Alpha_Yankee
Gulf_Alpha_YankeeLv13Gulf_Alpha_Yankee

this is my last one