The story in total is pretty good, ever since I picked it up I can't wait until it gets updated. The only thing is I would like longer chapters so more of the story could be developed, but since it's just the beginning I bet that it'll get better as the author keeps writing.

I read all the chapters and tried to keep going this is a new favorite if mine, ngl.

I really don't think Xavier is really that uncommon

Ves' character development is weird, it feels like he's going forward by moving backward. Like before he had to remove his conscience but now, it's slowly returning. Tainted but returning

Hopefully he's almost caught up, I can't wait until it's back

Still the aggression would probably help out in duels, plus his dad's breakthrough probably gave it a lot of spiritual feedback even though he's purposely handicapped it on that regard.

what happened to the design spirit for the devil tiger

I missed this book so much and now it's coming back, I'm so excited and can't wait to re-read the new/old parts

Same here, I can't wait to get engrossed in this new version of the novel

Everything's fine in ba sing se

does this mean Connor didn't kill the room of examinees

The leader is sir ves and his cat Lucky

This is a smart move by the author. also here

Will you ever pick this novel back up it was really good and a hidden gem from the usual webnovel bs

Have you dropped the novel?

can you do reviews for every book on this app 😆

Doesn't one of his new assistants have a specialty that would be perfect for this problem

I wonder if the larkinson's go with ves on his grand expedition, would they start their own second rate state? That would be interesting if so ves would always have a home base in the new star sector.

This is very late but I just got into your novel and I have a question. Why did you make yuels ign chess master like come on man.

The method here would make ves less of a designer and more of a thief/burglar imo. He's not forging a path through his own effort he's riding on the co-tails of other designer specialties and using them for his own. Kinda reminds me of a certain pirate designer and blind profit