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Charreos
CharreosLv33yr
2021-07-11 13:00

absolute unit of a story, it has basically no flaws and I repeat no flaws! writing quality - easily 5 stars one of the best I've seen on this site and even in general, its basically professional level stability of updates - it's not really that stable but I think this story deserves a full five stars story development - again one of the best I've seen on the website, the story is structured and written beautifully character design - again full five stars, the story so far gives us more and more about characters and I don't know about later characters but the current one is designed perfectly world background - the world seems full of things we don't know yet which gives you a thirst for more knowledge about it like the MC, the world itself is basically a normal world with a few tweaks here and there 5 stars ez pz no cap, read it I usually don't make such long reviews I encourage you to give it a try

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Thank you for your kind words ☺️☺️🙂

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