So before I begin this review I want to say a few things. 1. This is my own opinion and feelings on this story as of right now (it may change later). 2. My score is relative to the material on this site (meaning a 5 on webnovel does not equal a 5 on a published book on Amazon). Review: It's been a genuinely long time since I've read an original story that has a well crafted setup with an evil protagonist. So when I found this I was naturally quite happy. Unlike most other originals on this site the author takes care to first introduce you to the MC (who in turn reveals the world to the reader). It's actually quite sad how many authors skip this seemingly insignificant step. With this introduction we begin to build a connection with the protagonist and begin to understand his motives, thoughts and feelings. With this understanding breeds acceptance (and excitement for some select individuals). This makes it much easier for the audience to enjoy and continue on reading even further. After understanding his motives and thoughts we begin to see the real magic of this story. How the protagonist reacts and deals with the people and circumstances around him. The author conveys this conflict magnificently. The audience anticipates on what will happen next knowing what we know. And then we enjoy the events that happen later as a result of this conflict. To be able to craft such a setup is a rarity not often seen on this site (which is unfortunate). The reason I will give you on why you should read this story is this (it's simple really). It's an evil protagonist story that will leave you wanting more. More conflict, more introspection, more murder, more deception, more manipulation, more depravity, more INSANITY. It's really unfortunate I'm not able to read a chapter every day to satisfy my wants. Oh well I'll find solace in the fact that the one who reads this review and tries this story out for themselves will eventually (if not sooner) turn out just like me... Overall it's good try it! Current Score: 4.6
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LIKEAt first your novel had my interest. Then you used a code geass gif. Now you have my attention.
M_Lexi2:Thank you for the review, I'm glad you're liking the set up and the character building. I started writing this on the side while preparing my debut novel irl, I never expected it to be received so well. I'm so glad you're enjoying it and I guarantee much more depravity.image
Now you got me puMped up for your debut novel, i found This a bit too late but anyways, i wish you the best of luck![img=recommend][img=recommend]
M_Lexi2:Thank you for the review, I'm glad you're liking the set up and the character building. I started writing this on the side while preparing my debut novel irl, I never expected it to be received so well. I'm so glad you're enjoying it and I guarantee much more depravity.image
uwu i love Lelouch , and i love this story tooo
M_Lexi2:Thank you for the review, I'm glad you're liking the set up and the character building. I started writing this on the side while preparing my debut novel irl, I never expected it to be received so well. I'm so glad you're enjoying it and I guarantee much more depravity.image
Author, is there romance? (I prefer no romance but i just need to know ahead of time to prepare myself lol)
M_Lexi2:Thank you for the review, I'm glad you're liking the set up and the character building. I started writing this on the side while preparing my debut novel irl, I never expected it to be received so well. I'm so glad you're enjoying it and I guarantee much more depravity.image
One spoiler question Will mc have a happy ending? Sorry it’s just i don’t do too well with sad ending once im emotionally invested in the character
M_Lexi2:Thank you for the review, I'm glad you're liking the set up and the character building. I started writing this on the side while preparing my debut novel irl, I never expected it to be received so well. I'm so glad you're enjoying it and I guarantee much more depravity.image
yo author harem ?
M_Lexi2:Thank you for the review, I'm glad you're liking the set up and the character building. I started writing this on the side while preparing my debut novel irl, I never expected it to be received so well. I'm so glad you're enjoying it and I guarantee much more depravity.image
harem or monogamy?
M_Lexi2:Thank you for the review, I'm glad you're liking the set up and the character building. I started writing this on the side while preparing my debut novel irl, I never expected it to be received so well. I'm so glad you're enjoying it and I guarantee much more depravity.image