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Madym
MadymLv23yr
2021-04-21 23:27

A good work overall. The characters in the story seems well developed and thought thoroughly, the world... well the destroyed world seems as bad as it should be after destruction. The story is progressing smoothly and there is no question of bad writing quality. The only thing I found a little weird is soo less views even after 30+ chapters and so i believe the author is not promoting it that much. So for author just one advise and that is to promote it as much as he can. There is no issue with story so once properly promoted it can garner lot of views in a short time. Well all in all well done author.

A Story of Evil

Campoccino
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Campoccino
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Hello guys! Author here for a review of my book. 1. Point of View The story flows in a third person pov. This is to give details on other matters which the characters themselves may not know as of the moment. 2. Characters a. Main Character - he is a genius. This is a requirement for the Writing Prompt I joined. However, this does not mean that he is without flaw because that would make him omnipotent and, I don't want that. Some mistakes will be done by him but, I'll make it sure that these things are reasonable. b. Female Counterpart - This won't be a useless Sakura that would drag the main character down! In fact, on instances where the main character would be in a pinch, she would definitely come to his aide. I'm still thinking on what personality I'll give her and if I don't edit this part, it means that I want you to read it for yourself. c. Villain - Sorry I can't spoil it. I may just ruin the whole mood of the story if I do lol. 3. Pacing The story would progress slowly BUT THERE'S A REASON FOR THIS! I need to build up the proper emotions as things go along. I noticed that, if I try to speed things up too much, the events become shallow and bland and I don't want that. I want you to immerse yourself in the story as if everything was actually happening with you in it. :)) 4. Mistakes Of course there'd be a lot of mistakes lol. That's why I'll be counting on you guys to voice out your opinions on whatever you see on the story. I'll be sure to put them all into consideration as the story progresses. 5. THANK YOU FOR READING MY WOOOOORK!

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Mel_Aniv
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The protagonist was likeable and has his emotions fleshed out. It was very nice reading this novel as I saw potential in this author's work. The narration was splendidly done for the readers to easily read and has its immersion within it. Its charm was very good as I saw the story development was in a good pacing. Overall, a nice read! Gotta recommend this to others!

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Overall, it's an engaging story so far. Such an amazing and great novel of yours Author. I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Keep up the good work, Author.

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RedAdam04
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I will take the first spot to review this novel. It's a wonderful series, serious but funny. The conversation between the characters and the flow of the story ain't so bad. The story is written well and the stability of updates is outstanding. The author knows what he is doing so far. I recommend for the editor and his fans support him until the end of the contest. He deserves the top spot in the Contest of #170.

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hidden gem interesting and easy to read MC is likeable just try it yourself.................................. ..............................

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SuperMario3045
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I just want everyone to know I really enjoy this novel. It is definitely thought out really well. I am reading it at the point where it has 65 chapters and hadn't been updated in three days. I read all 65 chapters in one night. I do not regret having no sleep. Author, if you are reading this, I beg you, please don't drop this novel. I have been looking for a novel that I feel I will be satisfied with in the long run. That's not to say I don't like other stories but this is one that definitely has my full attention.

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