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Mithren
MithrenLv123yr
2021-06-04 22:03

The story is poorly executed. The women are written as objects of desire or sub-optimal representations of humans. The power and MC rational are poorly thought out... though this may be because the author is generating word bloat and can't be bothered to take the time to actually think through the story. This story is demeaning and poorly written. Save yourself the hassle and don't read it... Unless that's what you like to read.

Apocalypse: I Choose To Stop Time

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3.0
40 Chs

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Starlight_Knight
Starlight_KnightLv13

Looks like it would be a good time killer

3yr

BlackFan
BlackFanLv5

Sorry, i couldn't even pass the first chapter. Everything was so dumb that my last few remaining neurons were crying of pain. I would dye if i stayed any longer So i cannot judge much about the rest of the novel. The only thing i can say is that this author deserves a zero just for the a complete inability to make a first chapter. Nonetheless i will give a 3 for everything but the Character design. I just found a very bad bug in the review functionality. I cannot give minus infinity for Character design!!!

3yr
MR_FOOL_
MR_FOOL_Lv1

i hate this mc seems very indecisive. first he helped this woman who was knocking at his door claiming she would attract zombies he could have just locked her out and used her knocking sound as a cover to move some furniture to the door. but tthats still fine. he hesitated in choosing between 1: 100 ton gold 2: a peerless beauty 3: the ability to stop frking time. he also hesitated to choose the second time between free attribute, a knife and something which almost got him sorounded by zombies. seems like an mc who would grow stupid with time and keep hesitating made me drop it. i'll give two stars for the time stop power.

3yr
veru
veruLv11

Can anyone provide the raw please ? I'm just curious whether this will be like other system novel or maybe something special, at least i can have 60 chapter or something in chinese trial read with google translate

3yr
MorosKyrios
MorosKyriosLv13

Everything is dumb in this novel, mostly the mc... Power system is broken.(the bad type of broken) Author spent most of the chapter giving reasons on each reward option on why it is valuable then chose to select the option that was very2 obvious.

3yr
Kurdi123
Kurdi123Lv11

The Girl in ch 1 was unnecessary and in chapter 2 I dropped becouse how annoying she was.......................................................................

3yr
NiceGuy
NiceGuyLv12

been a while since I said this but THIS IS TRASH non-recyclable one at that [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

3yr
Eddicted
EddictedLv5

its better to call it word spam rather than a novel.......but of-course this website will ask money to let you read this meaningless disgusting word spam. giving it 1 star is a humiliation to all 1 star novels out there. unfortunately it is the lowest possible rating.

3yr
Eternal2145
Eternal2145Lv14

only got to chapter 4...it had potential but it is trash. for every single choice 2 are dumb and one is the obvious answer. also they over explain the choices and keep reiterating that money/beauties are worthless. i know they are its the apocalypse stf about it and keep going with the story i dont need the same information each chapter just to make up word count.

3yr
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